
When our radio dramas were completed we had the opportunity to listen to feedback of our final piece. This was really exciting because it was the first time that everyone had got together and listened to everyones final radio dramas. After we had listened to all the dramas we got given a lot of feedback for our radio drama and this is what I conducted from that.
What the audience liked about our drama:
After looking at the feedback there were a lot of positive comments about the sound effects especially the phone calls, traffic and police noises. We, as a group also felt that these effects worked really well within the story so we were glad that the audience had also picked up on this. We also had positive comments about the how the music was used in the background whilst one of the characters was reading out the suicide note. They had commented on how it made the setting more sad and believable. I think this is a positive feedback because it was exactly what we were going for so to know that we acheived it was really good. They also wrote about the use of music for our theme tune. With our theme tune we used a song by Rihanna mixed with police sirens and cars crashing and we were hoping for it to be catchy. Along with other comments such as good editing and sound affects we also had a few comments that the storyline was really good. This was the most important part for us because even if the sound effects were amazing, nobody may have understood the story, and one person even commented that the use of raising awareness about rape was really well done seeing as it is something that happens in everyday life.
What the audience disliked about our radio drama:
Finding out what people disliked about our drama was also very important to us because then we can take it away and improve for next time. After looking at the feedback given there was a few mentions that it was hard to hear our voices because of the sound effects. As I was also listening to the drama I thought this was a valid point and something that I had personally written down about things that needed improving. Another point was that the audience thought it was quite staged and they could tell we were acting. Although im some places I have to agree, I felt that everybody acted to the best of their ability and seeing as noone was drama students in our groups we knew that it wasn't going to be the best acting however I thought that this critism may have been unnessecary but however something we will take on board for next time. Aswell as other points being made that it was 'too cheesy', 'mumbling' and 'too loud' we ourselfs were shocked to hear a massive bang at the end of the drama. None of us were really sure where this had come from and it was something that a few people had picked up on however next time we will have to make sure we proof listen to the work right up until the last minute it is sent off incase any adjustments are made that could affect the drama.
What could be technically improved:
When looking at what could be techincally improved from our audience feedback we got similar comments from everyone saying that some of the sound levels needed adjusting as the voices were getting drowned out in the background. I think this is a reasonable comment because sometimes it was hard to hear the actors especially if the music suddenly got really loud. Another point that was made was that the drama seemed a bit rushed and it made it harder for the audience to understand what was going as it was hard to keep up. I think due to the drama only allowed to being a certain length of time, did actually make us rush quite a bit however I felt that we included all the neccessary parts to the drama that were needed.
What could be improved in relation to the plot/storyline:
After seeing the audience feedback for what they believe could be improved we had a lot of positive comments saying that it was a good storyline and that it was fine. However a few people think that the plot could have been a bit more realistic and that they felt that too much happened. People were also interested to hear more about Roxy's boyfriend Joe as he didn't play a huge role in the drama and maybe we could have included him a bit more and told people who and what he was about. Emotion was also another factor that poped up in how we could improve. The audience wanted to see a lot emotion going into the drama in order to make the overall piece sound more realistic. Aswell as these points, transitions between the scenes also came up in the feedback and that the transition from one scene to another needed to be a lot clearer. I think this is true because we had so much going on throughout our drama it was hard to know where the charcters were at certain points throughout the drama.
What I thought of our audience feedback:
I thought the audience feedback helped a lot because it showed us where we need to improve next time and also made us feel really good about the parts that people liked. I felt very proud to know that people enjoyed the drama and thought that the use of sound effects was good as it was something that I worked really hard on. If there was anything I had to change in our drama now we have recieved our audience feedback would be the sound levels and maybe listen to the drama quite a few times in order to see where voices are getting drowned out and where certain sound effects work better than others. Even though these needed improving I was really happy with the sound effects we had used because it was our first times using soundtrack pro it made it a lot harder however I feel that we tackled the task well and managed to use the sound effects in a good way. Another thing I think I would improve would have to be our acting skills, but for our first attempt I was very pleased with what we had produced.